Awww is right, Bel. Love Jana's smile, especially.

my favorite part are her eyes

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Daaaaaw! So cute!

Ahem. Once again, another great piece Bel. I know I've said this like a thousand times before, but the way you draw eyes is spectacular. Just the amount of detail and how expressive you make them is just amazing. Absolutely gorgeous. And even though you only had a few colors to work with, the shades you used are very vibrant which makes this piece all the more lively. Just all of the coloration is really impressive. I also notice that you've really been working on your hands. Over all, your hands have become a lot more detailed, a lot more accurate and it really shows. And lastly I really like the pose these two are in. Niar's look of surprise and Jana's playful expression are both really cute, and the peace sign from both of them just tops it off really nicely. Excellent work.

Now on to what I don't like. The first thing I notice is Niar's hair. While Jana's is really well drawn, Niar's just looks kinda raggy and thin. It just doesn't look like he has all that much. And on a personal note, I'd just like to point out two things. One, Niar's eyes are supposed to be blue-green and two, he technically has only one leather wristband instead of dual cloth ones. However, since almost no one (including Reza ) get's these details right, I'm not going to be to nitpicky about it. Overall, I don't have much to criticize about this piece.

So in conclusion, I really like it. The poses are great, the colors are phenomenal, and everything seems to really work well. Thank you for doing this for me Bel. It's really nice.

i sorry, i really looked into the RP sheet and didnt find the color of your eyes.. unless i totally missed it i took brown as default.. and about the leather wristband i saw it earlier ..

sorry ill try keeping it in mind.. i always refereing to Reza when i draw.. so i make same mistakes miaw...you not mad ?

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Heavens no! If I got mad every time someone missdrew Niar, I'd get high blood pressure every time he appeared in the main comic. I just like to point these things out in case someone needs a reference in the future.

I love it Bel! It's very obvious that you worked hard on this piece. BTW, what kind of pens are you using? I like Sakura Micron because they gave me a nice, clean finish. I noticed that your pen lines seem a bit jagged in places, but that's the only real critique I have.

I also love Jan'avin's eyes. Even though her eyes are black, you gave them light and expression. I also like the way you make parts of the skin shiny in certain places. That's something I was never that good at doing.

Thank you so much for drawing them for us. It's a wonderful picture, I'm very honored.

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i don't use pens at all
use a tablet, but oui indeed i have troubles to make straight lines.. i'm shaking a little.. i'm trying to correct this

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Ooooo, okay! Yeah, using a tablet is hard. Well, in that case, practice makes perfect! XD I'm horrible at drawing completely with a tablet so bravo to you!

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It is not who we want to be, but rather, who we make ourselves become.

aaaw Merci ^^
but its ok :3

i have a HELL of artbooks here to learn from... poses. people who give me tips. (thalar ! *hugs*) and on and on..

i'm very well surrounded ^_^ and the best payment is a the surprise you guys are having when i'm putting them online without warnings XD this feeling is the best ..

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And here i thought Deviant art meant perveted arts.. ¬_¬ *ahem*